Web Design · 6 min read
Website Copy That Sells: Write for Your Visitors, Not About Yourself
In our web projects, the most common cause of delays is not the technology. It is the copy. The design is approved, the site is built, and then everyone waits weeks for content, because writing about your own business is harder than it sounds. And when the copy finally arrives, it often shares one problem: it talks about the company but answers none of the visitor’s questions. Yet this copy, more than anything else, decides whether a visit becomes an inquiry.
The default mistake: the website talks about you
‘We are an innovative company with years of experience and the highest quality standards.’ You have read some variant of this sentence a hundred times, and you remember none of the companies behind it. It says nothing, because every competitor could publish it word for word.
In the first seconds on your site, a visitor does not care about your company history. They have a problem and are checking whether you solve it. Someone looking for a plumber wants to know: do you come on weekends? Roughly what does a boiler replacement cost? How fast? Every line that explains your philosophy instead pushes those answers further down the page.
Every visitor arrives with three questions
Whether you run a tax practice, a carpentry workshop, or a yoga studio: anyone landing on your website essentially wants three things. Am I in the right place? What do I get, and roughly what does it cost? And: what is the next step?
Check your homepage against these three questions. If the first screen does not make clear what you do and for whom, the answer to question one is already ‘not sure’, and many visitors leave before they scroll.
- Am I in the right place? → Say what you do and for whom in the first sentence. ‘Custom furniture workshop in Vienna’ beats any slogan.
- What do I get? → Name your services concretely, with a price range where you can. Even ‘from €1,500’ is more honest than silence.
- What is the next step? → One clear path to an inquiry: call, form, or booking. One is enough.
Headings carry half the page
Most visitors do not read your website, they scan it. The Nielsen Norman Group measured this early on: in its reading study (1997), 79 percent of test users scanned every new page, and only 16 percent read word by word. A later analysis (2008), based on some 45,000 page views, found users get through at most 28 percent of the words per visit, realistically closer to 20. What gets read are headings, bold text, and buttons; the paragraphs in between only where a heading has earned attention.
That suggests a simple test: read only the headings of your page, top to bottom. Do they alone amount to a sales conversation? ‘Our Services’, ‘About Us’, ‘Contact’ does not. ‘Kitchens made to measure, planned in your home’, ‘How a project runs’, ‘What a fitted kitchen costs with us’ gets much closer.
Concrete beats polished
Adjectives like ‘high-quality’, ‘bespoke’, or ‘professional’ are claims. Evidence persuades. Instead of ‘fast delivery’: ‘installed within two weeks of your order’. Instead of ‘years of experience’: ‘since 2011, more than 300 bathrooms completed’. Instead of ‘customer-focused’: ‘you won’t reach a hotline, you’ll reach the master craftsman directly’.
This only works with numbers and facts that are true. If you cannot back a claim up, cut it rather than softening it into a vague adjective. A website with five concrete statements is more credible than one with twenty fuzzy ones.
One next step, not five
Many websites end by offering everything at once: newsletter, callback, contact form, PDF download, social media buttons. The visitor is asked to choose, and when in doubt chooses nothing.
Decide on one primary next step per page and phrase it as an outcome, not an action. ‘Book a free consultation’ tells visitors what they get. ‘Submit’ only tells them what the form does. And say what happens afterwards: ‘We reply within one business day.’ That noticeably lowers the threshold.
Where good copy comes from: your customer conversations
You do not have to invent the wording. Your customers supply it. Which questions do callers ask again and again? What words do customers use to describe their problem before you solve it? Why did your last customer pick you over the competitor?
Those sentences, taken over almost verbatim, make better website copy than anything written at a desk. They hit your audience’s tone automatically, and they answer questions that are demonstrably being asked. An afternoon with your last twenty inquiry emails is the best copy research there is.
And if the writing still doesn’t get done?
Then you are in good company. That is exactly why copy is part of the scope in our web projects: we interview you about your business, ask the questions your customers would ask, and write the pages from that. You check whether it is accurate and sounds like you. This is usually faster than spending weeks in front of a blank document, and the website goes live without a content bottleneck.